the last stand (prologue)

Name: the last stand
Rating: T 15+
Auther: harushi
Chapter No.: prologue
Characters: Harushi, Savin, Dominic, Narora
Ganre: Action, Romance, Adventure
Statis: in progress (just made it up)

in the year 2016 exactally 7 years after a great battle the heros all lost something to narora before they sealed him away in a magical tree...but now he threatens to be revived.

Harushi living on an island to be at peace is visited by his old friends dominic and savin. they sat and talked about old times. "hehehe we really were asking for it during that little rumble huh?" harushi asked his friends as they both laughed and agreed. "So harushi we starting the old team back up?" savin asked as dominic walked up "There are alot of people who need a good ass kicking." harushi looked at his metal arm "guys last fight we got in i lost my arm dominic you got that scar on your eye and savin you almost got thrown into a pit of lava... just go ill need to think."

hours later his friend left and harushi went to bed laying there thinking of the past till there was a loud crash down stairs. he ran and saw three eyed figures with long sharp claws destroying his home so he ran into his room and took the katana over his bed out which had a mark of a dragon on it. "Its been while" he said as he walked down stairs to confront them before being ambushed by 15 of the creatures. he slashed and hacked at them killing 2 before one stabbed him in his chest missing his lung and hurled him against a wall.

4 days later at their old HQ dominic and savin were packing up their things "im gonna miss this old job...fighting villains being a hero you know dom?" savin asked his friend dominic looked and sighed nodding to his friend when they heard "where the hell are you guys going? we got some ass kicking to do!" they looked up to see harushi with a few bruises on him. "Harushi!" they both yelled when he looked at them "we're back in buisness guys!" ...

to be continued....

Very good, i like the flow, the langth is good to, but the flow makes up for that. the drama it good also. my rating...10/10! PIRFICT SCORE!

oh yea i agree with that

and hell i just made it up in 5 minutes

its still made the top of the list! (list in "my ratings") Savin and me below that at 9/10.

NICE!!!!

i have a qustion... you wrote: "the heros all lost something to narora before they sealed him away in a magical tree...but now he threatens to be revived."

YOU MADE ME EVIL?!?!?! well that might not be so bad but what do you mean by "The heros all lost something ot Narora."?

i lost my right arm its now mechanical dominic got cut on his left eye and lost vision with that eye and savin got dropkicked almost falling into a pit of lava

so evil Narora did that...?

yes

oh i see, but one more qustion... How did Narora become evil... like did Aiyokuia find a way to take him over or did he lose something that made him evil. did the Ryuubi(dragon sealed in him) take him over with the 12th tail or something...? if you could try to post in the next Chapter a 'Flashback' or something if its not too much truble...?

you ever gonna post a new chapter? not to be pushy or anything but...