Sanchiro's Mistake(Umm the ukitake brothers past)

This is the story of how the ukitake brothers
ended up the way they did with their strange alchemy talents

It is a few years after the Ishbalan war, the havoc cause has ceased and there is an air of unsteady peace. Though most of the alchemist left, some stayed to help with the chaos they caused. A female alchemist, who was helping, met an ishbalan male. hey both fell in love, and decided to marry. They had three kids, two boys and a little girl. They named the boys Monsoon and Sanchiro, the girl Jessica.
Their mother was against alchemy, even though she herself was an alchemist. Though curiosity intrigued one of their children, Young Monsooon went into his mother's room, and took some books. He quickly went into his room, and started reading. He gained knowledge of basic alchemy, but his main intrest was in fire. He practiced night and day, all without his mother knowing. He became a novice at it, and even had his own gloves in which the transmutation circle was sewn in. One day he wanted to try metal alchemy. This he could not pick up, but kept trying. He used beakers, chemicals, and other substances to perfect this. His mother came in and saw him. She was not mad, but warned him never to let his siblings know about alchemy.

Sanchiro had overheard Monsoon ad his mother talking that night
that she had caught him using alchemy so he waited for
his mom to leave to work and then went into monsoon's
room when he kn ew he was practicing alchemy and said
"brother what are you doing?"

Monsoon hears his brother come in and quickly covers up the beakers
"uh what do you mean? and shouldn't you be getting to be, it late..."
Theres a stir in the other room
"and keep it down, Jessica is sleeping"
Monsoon starts thinking of an excuse to make his brother leave

Sanchiro points at the beakers"is that...what mom calls
alchemy?"

"er...alchemy? You know mom hates that why would she allow me to do it. you know....its..commen, commen sense"
A bead of sweat rolls down his forehead

"mhm..."Sanchiro pretends to walk away and then dashes and grabs a book he runs to his room and locks his door"Alchemy.....Metal..hmm"

Monsoon runs into the room
"give that back!"

The door is locked and he read a random page in the middle
he drew one of the diagrams from the book with the blue chalk in
his room, he then followed the instructions he grabbed 3 metal bars that were
stacked at the side of his room he closed his eyes and concentrated
blue electricity started circulating around him and the cirle and the
three bars conected to make a triangle
Sanchiro was speechleess"...wha?"

Monsoon heard the sound of transmutation
"mom is gonna kill me"
Monsoon put his hands on the door and a spark comes from under the door
Sanchiro sees the spark quickly dissapate.
in an instant the door explodes into peices, and Monsoon rushes in and is about to grab Sanchiro and the book but notices the triangle
"did....did you make that?"

"ummm yeah..was that..alchemy?"
Sanchiro has a scared expression and then an
expression of excitement"that was amazing"he grabs the book
and says"let me keep doing it...or ill tell mom"

Monsoon eyes sanchiro
"oh really now"
Monsoon thinks it over
"fine on one condition. You will not show this to any of your friends, or jessica, and..."
Monsoon looks aty the door
"you will fix this door"

"understood...."Sanchiro then continued to read and study up
on the book he read it all night waiting for his mother to return home
but she never did instead a man had come to our door asking to
speak with brother

Monsoon comes to the door
"can i help you?"

Man- I came here to tell you that...

Sanchiro-*closes the door*who is that man....whats he talking to brother about?

Sanchiro could see that his brother was not well, as if he had seen a ghost. His face was pale, his eyes wide open, and fighting back tears. He fell to the floor, defeated, weak.
How could it have happend...
He looked to Sanchiro, and started to cry

sanchiro ran out of the house and stayed by the lake near there house for a couple of days and just practiced alchemy he had over heard the news later on sanchiro continued through the forest looking for his sister who never came home from her friends house the day before they got the bad news

Monsoon walked near the lake, and saw his younger brother practicing. He took out a cigarett and lit it, and slowly placed it in his mouth. He recently took up smoking to cope with the loss, and the stress of their mothers death. He checked his watch, 7 o'clock AM.
"Hey sanchiro i'm going to work, don't over work your self..."
With one last puff he threw the cigarett down and steepped it out, then went through the front door, and went to his job.

Sanchiro walked out of hit room and left his note pad on his bed he went for a walk by the lake and sawa body floating in the water he walked up to it".....no...it cant be"he looked at the body and it was the body of his sister with a hole in her head"...not her to..."sanchiro picked her up and brough her to his room"that does it so god wants to mess around with my life well ill hop on the same playing field as him"sanchiro went into his basement and gathered a couple of things"this should be all that i need...ill bring her back one way or another.."he placed all of the items in a circle hed had drawn and he placed his sisters body in the middle"brothers gonna be s happy when he gets home"sanchiro put his hands on the circle and red electricity started flowing out"...this is wrong..whats happening"black hands start to fly out of the transmutation circle and they grab sanchiros body and it starts to dissapear"NO WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME?!"and in a flash sanchiro was before a giant gate, the gate opened and he saw tons of little eyes gazing at him then a bunch of hands fly at him and pull him and he starts to see everything "its too much!"he shuts his eyes and one of the hands opens them and in another flash hes back infront of the gate and his body slowly dissapears but before it does sanchiro inches towards his note pad and flips to the last page and in his blood draws the transmutation circle for a soul attachment he turned around and the last thing he saw was what he had created"..that cant be my sis-.."and he was gone

Hours later Monsoon walked to the door. He unlocked it, and walked in. He puffed out some smoke from the cigarett in his mouth, and called.
"Brother! where are you!? I've got some dinner!"
The house was filled with silence, but this was normal since his borhter was normally out back training. He set the food down and looked into his brother's room, an saw some notes.
"Must be trying to learn mo...."
A cricle drawn on one of the notes caught his eye, and he walked in.
"this looks like....."
Monsoon's heart dropped.
"no..he...he didint!"
He ran outside and found nothing. He quickly ran to the basement, and his mouth dropped. There, he saw the same circle, blood everywhere, and something else in the middle of it.
He heard his sisters voice, though she sounded sick
"brother..."
Monsoon slowly walked to his sister
"Jessica, come here..."
The figure of his sister looked up, and the light caught it's face

Monsoon's heart stopped, and the voice again rang out from this abomination
"brother, im scared...come brother..."
her sweet voice was now dark and mangled
"No...I...Ican't..."
The thing stood up and walked slowly toward Monsoon
"help me brother.....help..."
Monsoon raised his hand
"forgive me...jessica...."
With one quick snap a spark went to the center and, in a firey explosion, the mangled body was destroyed.
Monsoon fell on his knees, he didn't know what to do. He looked up and saw a metal doll, with an alchemy circle on it. he looked around it and saw his brothers notes
"maybe..maybe this is the only way..."
He placed his hands on the circle, and eletricity started to fly out. he could feel his energy diminishing, as the energy began to increase. The doll began to twitch, but still it wasn't enough. With one final burts of energy, the transmutation became complete. Monsoon's arms were burnt, and he was weak.
"Sanchiro..please...are you there..."

Sanchiro replied"...it wasnt human...i failed.."

Monsoon was so relieved, but then he got angry. He stood up and grabed his brother
"HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!"

Sanchiro pulled fom his brother walke d out side with his brother and said"..burn it to the ground...now every bit of it my notes everything"

Monsoon snapped his fingers and a huge spark went inside the house. For a few moments, nothing, but then a small crackling sound an da huge explosion engulffed the house. Everything was burned, disintergrated. ALl the memoires of our lives were there, the memories of out mother, father sister. And in one foul swoop it was gone. both brothers turned around, and walked away from those damned memories